Business Writing
A sentence can be polished and still leave the reader without a decision. Business Writing repairs the thinking first, puts the bottom line first, and shows every editorial judgment in a scorecard.
Most weak business writing is not a grammar problem. The reader is unclear, the requested outcome is buried, or a claim has no evidence behind it. Line editing that starts before those problems are visible produces cleaner confusion.
This playbook works in three modes. Edit preserves a draft's supported meaning while improving it. Build turns notes into a document without filling gaps with plausible details. Audit diagnoses the three pillars without silently rewriting. Every edit or build ends with a Change Scorecard, so the writer can see what moved, why it moved, and whether any meaning changed.
Polished confusion is still confusion. Repair the thought, then the structure, then the sentence.
DOCUMENT JOB Reader: operating committee Requested outcome: approve an extension through October 31 TRUTH INVENTORY Supplied: June 3 start, 120 invitations, 84 setups, 11 tickets Missing: evidence that the revised setup flow improves completion The missing evidence is labeled. It is not converted into a forecast.
BOTTOM LINE Extend the pilot through October 31 so the team can test the revised setup flow before considering a wider release. WHY IT MATTERS The extension creates time to test the stated change. The input does not support a claim that completion will improve, so that result is not promised. OPEN QUESTION Evidence needed: completion criterion for the revised setup flow.
BEFORE Results look strong, so I think we should probably expand soon. AFTER Recommendation and decision date needed. Performance evidence needed before a wider release. WHY The original sentence contains no supplied result, date, or approval. The revision exposes those gaps and does not turn the recommendation into a decision.
CHANGE SCORECARD Location: opening Before: recommendation buried in paragraph three After: recommendation in the first paragraph Pillar: document structure Meaning changed: no AUDIT BOUNDARY 0 = missing, contradicted, or harmful 1 = present but incomplete or inconsistent 2 = clear enough to support the requested outcome The dimensions locate the next repair. They do not certify the document.
business-writing/
├── SKILL.md ← edit, build, and audit modes
├── meta.yaml ← version, sources, test prompts, changelog
├── LICENSE.md ← MIT
├── assets/
│ ├── edited-document-template.md ← the business document scaffold
│ ├── change-scorecard.md ← the visible editorial record
│ └── audit-scorecard.md ← diagnosis without a rewrite
└── references/
└── editing-standard.md ← three pillars and seven revision passes"Edit this doc to the business writing standard."